[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060320 um 2256 Uhr · in reply to: How do you like it, baby? #4756

first i will say i am bi i seem to be the only one on this thread to speak up but i am
i am definatly a sub love being overpowered dont ask why just…do
love pain yes pain is pleasure maybe not quiet to the extreme but yes
ill agree with your “motto” shall i call it?
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 2249 Uhr · in reply to: gay guys #3395

yes gay guys are cool for the most part but i wont go as far as to say they are hot.
i agree with you m.
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 2246 Uhr · in reply to: if ur bf leaves u ? #4050

ya vixen you covered it all right
i (as always) agree with miyoko
it think all women want sex like men but we just are suppose to be better than the men (not saying we are men) so everyone gets the impression that women dont want sex.
no offense to any men who read this i was just stating my opion and if you dont like it…well too fucking bad
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 1931 Uhr · in reply to: But Whips and Chains Excite Me……. #3976

all r fun so live it up…dont ask i have no idea.
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 1859 Uhr · in reply to: Pain #4389

as much as i hate doing it i agree with sunrava, no offense to you rava, but it isnt the greatest piece ive read…and trust me ive read a lot. but then again its not exactly the worst either…*shivers at past awful pieces* ahhhhhhhhhh nevermind you dont want to know lol
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 1855 Uhr · in reply to: poem silence #4960

isnt anyone going to say…anything?
critisim opinions….something please
look but dont reply i see how it is.
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 1839 Uhr · in reply to: Freaks and Craziness #4965

Miyoko Tenjin!
your right you are going to get slapped for this.
any way you know i love you but talking about idiots you are one too dont forget that.
btw she is just as bad as me
so she has no room to talk do you miyoko?
btw my abs still are making me want to curl forward lol
yes i am an idiot i will admit that, but i get it form miyoko so… pm her also.
just so ya know im not the only idiot on here! 😉
lol,
Ashiri

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060320 um 1825 Uhr · in reply to: Midnight Intrusion #4348

i, as usual, agree with miyoko. it is well written. i especially liked infinitys love. i thought it was a great and creative way to describe the situation.
as for me i always write when im sad or depressed. i cant realy write,but my happy poems are by far the worst.
again i loved it it would be wonderful to read more. great job.
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 1817 Uhr · in reply to: Poetry “Dark Embrace” #3569

i agree with miyoko (again) all are great and mine shall not be posted for they cannot even be…compared…to such great works of art. i again am amazed. 😀
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 1801 Uhr · in reply to: Dragon… #4064

i agree with LD and Miyoko both. it does seemed rushed and rough. i have read many of your pieces and as…someone…said it isnt quiet the same as the others.
but all in all it is very well written (yes i say that a lot 🙂 ) and is really goood but could use some improvements. 😀

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060320 um 1750 Uhr · in reply to: Incredible #4728

it is really good i know its hard to rhyme for a poem especcially that long of one
um…..most like constructive critisism,but…uh… i cant offer any seeings how your writing is better than mine. 😉
i know how that one goes my, now ex, boyfriend was the same for me. i wont go into details. i do know how that one feels…ask miyoko. 🙂
anyway very good and i look forward to reading more.
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060320 um 1047 Uhr · in reply to: Hunter’s first peotry posted on this site #3753

your poem is very good
it could use some twiking tho the last line is…..it….just doesnt seem to fit right.
sorry but im trying to give you some constructive critisism
is it working
and how did this post become a sex post?
not that i mind. 😈

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060319 um 1509 Uhr · in reply to: Does this count as shameless? #4819

with a little more work i think you could be shameless. 😀

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060319 um 1503 Uhr · in reply to: opusvampirus #4946

yes please can we keep it in english? if not i just might have to go japanese on all of you. 😉 😈

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060319 um 1457 Uhr · in reply to: Ever have one of these days? #4499

for me those days seem pretty popular. oh wait….no i dont think im doing it on purpose. 😉
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060319 um 1451 Uhr · in reply to: Keeping in touch with your future self #3715

@Lady_DeMornay wrote:

Don’t press that button!!!!

Sidonia DeMornay
The Huntress

sounds like something i should warn myself about. 😉

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060319 um 1439 Uhr · in reply to: In need of friends. Please read and reply. #4486

your state? what gives you that idea? maybe it belongs to someone else. oooooooooooh what now? i dont want any of your food so i will stay out of that but sit on the couch i will.
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060318 um 2342 Uhr · in reply to: I’m as guilty as the next girl when it comes to…. #4281

LoveWithDiamonds- all i have to say to you is wow. just wow!
Ashiri

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060318 um 2320 Uhr · in reply to: socks poll #1734

oh but Lady_DeMorne maybe some like the wipe so we of course must say someting.
😈
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060318 um 2311 Uhr · in reply to: New post…”old poetry” #3685

having not read your work before i must applaude you.
it is well written sunrava.
i loved it and id love to read more
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060318 um 2303 Uhr · in reply to: In need of friends. Please read and reply. #4484

um……im already your friend so why am i relpying?
any way i thought i’d let you know how friendly you are! teehee.
Ashiri

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ashiri on 20060316 um 0106 Uhr · in reply to: Obviously new #4885

@necromancerza wrote:

…you`ll fit right in 🙂

you sound like the rest of us so…welcome to vtk hope you enjoy!

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060316 um 0055 Uhr · in reply to: Poetry ( Untitled) #4875

personally i feel it should be best left untiltled. this is odd for me cuz i always title my writing (which all sucks) but this is good w/o a title. again very well written.

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ashiri on 20060316 um 0050 Uhr · in reply to: Poetry ( ?? Wings ?? ) #4891

its relly good i think it is well written with good imagry it… flows if you know what i mean. i would love to read more of your poetry. youre really good.