first i will say i am bi i seem to be the only one on this thread to speak up but i am
i am definatly a sub love being overpowered dont ask why just…do
love pain yes pain is pleasure maybe not quiet to the extreme but yes
ill agree with your “motto” shall i call it?
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ya vixen you covered it all right
i (as always) agree with miyoko
it think all women want sex like men but we just are suppose to be better than the men (not saying we are men) so everyone gets the impression that women dont want sex.
no offense to any men who read this i was just stating my opion and if you dont like it…well too fucking bad
Ashiriall r fun so live it up…dont ask i have no idea.
Ashirias much as i hate doing it i agree with sunrava, no offense to you rava, but it isnt the greatest piece ive read…and trust me ive read a lot. but then again its not exactly the worst either…*shivers at past awful pieces* ahhhhhhhhhh nevermind you dont want to know lol
Ashiriisnt anyone going to say…anything?
critisim opinions….something please
look but dont reply i see how it is.
AshiriMiyoko Tenjin!
your right you are going to get slapped for this.
any way you know i love you but talking about idiots you are one too dont forget that.
btw she is just as bad as me
so she has no room to talk do you miyoko?
btw my abs still are making me want to curl forward lol
yes i am an idiot i will admit that, but i get it form miyoko so… pm her also.
just so ya know im not the only idiot on here! 😉
lol,
Ashirii, as usual, agree with miyoko. it is well written. i especially liked infinitys love. i thought it was a great and creative way to describe the situation.
as for me i always write when im sad or depressed. i cant realy write,but my happy poems are by far the worst.
again i loved it it would be wonderful to read more. great job.
Ashirii agree with miyoko (again) all are great and mine shall not be posted for they cannot even be…compared…to such great works of art. i again am amazed. 😀
Ashirii agree with LD and Miyoko both. it does seemed rushed and rough. i have read many of your pieces and as…someone…said it isnt quiet the same as the others.
but all in all it is very well written (yes i say that a lot 🙂 ) and is really goood but could use some improvements. 😀it is really good i know its hard to rhyme for a poem especcially that long of one
um…..most like constructive critisism,but…uh… i cant offer any seeings how your writing is better than mine. 😉
i know how that one goes my, now ex, boyfriend was the same for me. i wont go into details. i do know how that one feels…ask miyoko. 🙂
anyway very good and i look forward to reading more.
Ashiriyour poem is very good
it could use some twiking tho the last line is…..it….just doesnt seem to fit right.
sorry but im trying to give you some constructive critisism
is it working
and how did this post become a sex post?
not that i mind. 😈with a little more work i think you could be shameless. 😀
yes please can we keep it in english? if not i just might have to go japanese on all of you. 😉 😈
for me those days seem pretty popular. oh wait….no i dont think im doing it on purpose. 😉
Ashiri@Lady_DeMornay wrote:
Don’t press that button!!!!
Sidonia DeMornay
The Huntresssounds like something i should warn myself about. 😉
your state? what gives you that idea? maybe it belongs to someone else. oooooooooooh what now? i dont want any of your food so i will stay out of that but sit on the couch i will.
Ashiriashiri on 20060318 um 2342 Uhr · in reply to: I’m as guilty as the next girl when it comes to…. #4281LoveWithDiamonds- all i have to say to you is wow. just wow!
Ashirioh but Lady_DeMorne maybe some like the wipe so we of course must say someting.
😈
Ashirihaving not read your work before i must applaude you.
it is well written sunrava.
i loved it and id love to read more
Ashirium……im already your friend so why am i relpying?
any way i thought i’d let you know how friendly you are! teehee.
Ashiri@necromancerza wrote:
…you`ll fit right in 🙂
you sound like the rest of us so…welcome to vtk hope you enjoy!
personally i feel it should be best left untiltled. this is odd for me cuz i always title my writing (which all sucks) but this is good w/o a title. again very well written.
its relly good i think it is well written with good imagry it… flows if you know what i mean. i would love to read more of your poetry. youre really good.