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poem silence

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ashiri@ashiri
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#1 · 20 März, 2006, 1038

silence
i live in the silence
as the world goes by
i hear but i dont understand
is the world passing me by
or am i standing still
as i live in the silence
i feel a pain
down in my heart
i feel as if my heart has been ripped apart
in the silence
i ask myself
do i belong here, in the silence?

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ashiri@ashiri
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#2 · 20 März, 2006, 1855

isnt anyone going to say...anything?
critisim opinions....something please
look but dont reply i see how it is.
Ashiri

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fenrir@fenrir
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#3 · 2 Juni, 2006, 1519

nice wording.

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ujio@ujio
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#4 · 25 Juni, 2006, 1423

Considering the subject matter, perhaps our silence is your praise 8)

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