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Thank you. It was written for someone who I loved very deeply, not all that long ago. Our relationship came to its end, as did our friendship, but I dont regret a single word I wrote to her.
@Hunter wrote:
That is excellent! It brings back a very painful memory, however it is great writing because it makes me feel something. I loved it!
Thank you! I thought it was horrible, but…the event it was written to has its signifigance.
@White_Raven wrote:
I know there are many types of vampyres out there, and many with different types of powers or even some with none at all. some are psychic vamps, others are normal, and i no not much more than that. I have found none like myself. I am a more animalistic vamp. I do not transform or anything but while hunting i see in black and white but the border turns red. I can understand animals, and my senses are so much more than normal from what they normally are. I can smell people from at least 100 ft away, i can hear their blood pulsing in their viens, i feel the vibrations of their steps. and from there i understand more of their nature than they realize. but enough of me what type of powers do u have what is your world like when hunting? 😈 👿
Yes…quite the same happens to me, and I am a blood vamp. It is possible it is just the way you are. As for Powers, I also have immensly good healing powers and Magickal abilities… for reasons I care not to discuss.
well, that letter was…mildly amusing. something to “pass the centuries” contemplating. Do i indeed lust after Humans because i am jealous?!?! *rolls eyes* (note the sarcasm)
Very funny? I find it very pathetic. Though I too would vote for him to watch his fall from “Power“...
I am glad you are proud of what you are, Evan. Please…PM me…
And people should not be so cruel to you.
ALL OF YOU- Many people do not believe in Vampyres or Vampyrism…but does that mean we do not exist? No. We DO exist. We are as real as any Human. Do you truly limit your belief to US? Many people speak of wishing people would not be so closed minded, and yet you are all being just the same. Do not be so quick to judge…
No offense meant, but rly!
Ah…yes. I am sadly inexperienced in this topic, though the bondage thing is quite…fun. *winks* It HAS been a while…
my ex lover was a hot one, but things came between us…
The Dark Lady
because your poetry is so damn…amazing, navre, i am much looking forward to read that book! congratulations! it is truly a long-awaited day when one so talented is discovered and accepted by publishers.
*smiles* Ishakanu Tinu! BTW…what do you think of Thurday? i say it cant come fast enough, if you get my…desires.
YOur Lady
@necromancerza wrote:
Oi! She’s bi. Trust me. See…Ashiri’s my girlfriend. And…lets just say I have…proof
Which is where exaclty? 🙄
Our proof is…purely physical. *grin*
@Ashiri wrote:
Miyoko Tenjin!
your right you are going to get slapped for this.
any way you know i love you but talking about idiots you are one too dont forget that.
btw she is just as bad as me
so she has no room to talk do you miyoko?
btw my abs still are making me want to curl forward lol
yes i am an idiot i will admit that, but i get it form miyoko so… pm her also.
just so ya know im not the only idiot on here! 😉
lol,
Ashiri
Oops! *cringes* *wicked smile* slap me? why? oh, alright then. *Smiles* but if youre gonna slap me, make it hard baby, make it hard! no, i dont have any room to talk, do i babe? your abs still hurt? poor you. I didnt fuck you that hard, did i? it was quite good, but really! your abs hurt huh? ill have to make em hurt more…you remember what i said comes next? *wink* *Evil grin* you know you want it…*wink* ciao, baby…until next time.
The Dark Lady
@Ashiri wrote:
if you want that essay you should talk to me in person! 😉
Oi…shes got a point there! just talk to ashiri!
@I3L3S wrote:
ok so being i am on a sex forum let me ask you all something. how do you like your fucks? sweet and seductive 🙄 or…some hadrcore hammering 😈 ? whats your fetishes and turn on’s? who is a sub and who is a dom? how many like pain in sex or getting or hitting it from behind. whips, belts, paddles, ropes, chains, cuffs. all that goos shit. and if you take pain do you take it to the extreme or if u give it do you give to the extreme. on a more personal note now…how many are just out for fucks? or fuck buddies? or an actual mate if you havent one already? ummm okay how many of you are gay or bi?, just curious i am straight but i do not condone anything or anyone. all i can say friends is drink merry, feed hard and fuck the world around you all away, fuck like you’ll die this very day or night. after all, all we have in life is blood, each other, great music and dark fucking.
Hmm…well, im bi, as Ive already said. I adore pain. its like…amazing. the harder you hit, and the more it hurts, the more youll turn me on. i like taking pain…but giving is nice too. im a sub. i like being controlled. i dont like…like SUPER hard sex, but moderate is always nice. and if im getting fingered by a chick…nails feel WONDERFUL. lol. (yes, Ashiri.,..I was complimenting YOU there) i like pain. pain is pleasure. i like it all!
The Dark Lady
@necromancerza wrote:
first i will say i am bi
VTK does not believe you …. send pics 😉
Oi! She’s bi. Trust me. See…Ashiri’s my girlfriend. And…lets just say I have…proof…that she’s bi. As am I. *wicked grin*
not that i mind, of course. I wouldnt want you any other way, darling!
Have a little fun duing the “sex is not allowed” hours, dont we baby?
The Dark Lady
I replied to your post in a PM, so feel free to PM me back or not.
The Dark Lady,
Miyoko
Amakadaru,
Hmm…well, good start. It seems rather rough and WAY too fast. Even if it is part of the vampire’s personality, you should do some background and charcter building first. i liked how you started tot describe the setting. there should be more of that setting described though. and perhaps go into the main chara…Glenn…a bit more. He needs some description. right now, he is a 2D chara…so hes flat, basically. i think you should go into his personality DEFINATELY appearance, family life…things like that. you ought to have at least a page or two before the vampire is introduced. it seems to fast and in order to keep up the pace, the entire book would have to be that speed, which could cause problems.
“It was a rainy night; the clouds were a dark purple. The constant pattering of the raindrops on trashcans and the road echoed all around the dark alley. The only light was filtered through the curtains of a window on the third story, casting a crimson glow on the alley”
I really liked that part. it was a good bit of description as well as a good start. I say congrats on that paragrah. But the rest is just a little rough and too fast. go into depth more and youll be good. but please…i look forward to reading it as it progresses! seems like you have a good storyline established. just build your charas more and add more detail and itll be a hit!
Most Sincerely,
The Dark Lady
ok, thought of something else i could say here. i think you need a bit more description in some areas. its just the teensiest bit rough. you know what i mean? but really…wow. this completely caught my attention. good word choice and use of rythym.
The Dark Lady
–––`–––{@ Excellent! A rose to show my appreciation for your work! 🙂
Nav`re, you have a way with words. this is beautifully written. however, i have read many of yours thus far as you are quickly becoming the best poet i have read the works of in quite some time, and this one doesnt quite match up. it is wonderful, but seems slightly…rough. when compared to the rest of your works, this is hitting below the mark. but for someone who doesnt have as much written as you, it would be excellent. The inpression i got is that you wrote it a little fast. its almost as though theres something on your mind other than what you are writing here. my suggestion would be to try and use more description and better word choices in some areas. all in all, excellent piece.
The Dark Lady
nope. not shameless. keep workin at it and you could be tho.. 😉
LMFAO! wow!
heh…i love it!
amusing…very amusing.
I think you all should sing that the next time you march into a seriously religious area. LMFAO[/quote]
lMFAO…that would be…amusing.
good find!
and what, may i ask, happens when ALL three of your friends and yourself included are mentally unstable? 🙄
very convenient..
yep…i think weve all had those!
@Navre wrote:
Children of the Night……Yours is by far better than mine dear Sid….and i absolutly love it…..yet I could not resist posting this one as it shares a line of cominality….forgive my intrusion…..
Waiting within the dark, an odd presence the only hint of his existence.
Those who hover around the light,
Few will venture into the mist to seek him out.
What if anything will they find, For he will endeavor to run,
Keeping hidden within the shadows.
Will they give chase, traveling further into the void,
Mindful should they be, for soon their way will be lost.
It is then the wolf stands, full within the moon’s light,
A companion he has found.
Another joins the fold, those who shall be named,
Children of the Night.
As usual, beautiful and i loved it!
all the poems posted on this thread are amazing! you all write beautifully! i may post a few of my own, but for shame at their lack of eloquency.
@Sunrava wrote:
*claps* been a while since I have seen such raw emotion in a poem. Excepting a few on this site, I have had nothing but drivel to read.
i completely agree with sunrava! this is excellent- both of them! *claps* *bows* great work! i look forward to seeing more!
The Dark Lady
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