Zitat von navre am 16 Dezember, 2006, 1814 Uhr

Ok folks so acording to the great and wonderful english teacher with the poetry degree the first verson didn't cut the mustard let me know what you think of the new one which was by the way was an A+ submission .....

To the dawn, he who crawls towards the light,

Born unto a world dominated by Apollos embrace.

Yet this darkness, his mothers womb,

Soon one shall be many.

Walk in shadow, keeping to the night.

To call the moon,

High upon the stone mount.

Stoic howls that fill the night,

Such music to the ears of many, who revel,

With delight.

Hear the words, heed the call.

Come one, come all, dance among the stars.

Waltz among the moon light illuminated

By its Grace.

Listen to the symphony of the night.

For it shall play,

To the dawn.