Sugar.Coat.Me [(poem)]
Zitat von coma-white am 18 Juni, 2007, 0250 UhrThis is fucking pointless, why am I even trying?
As I waste this cigarette, my song, is slowly dyeing.I can’t write, I can’t relate to your bullshit situations.
Through these years, I’ve wandered off, I boarder aberration.I’ve found a way to be concise.
a few stark words, and then..
Boom, pick me up.
That’s oh so nice.
Oh wait, I’m dead again.A simple piece of glass can do it.
Oh so cold and clear..
I play tag with goD from one hit.
Then demons, do I hear.They tell me how to write my songs,
and argue, will I not.
How could I?
I’m so sedated..
Such love can’t be bought .Oh, wait.
Yes it can...
That's how this came to be.
50 dollars, half a gram, sugar coated me.[(tell me what you think, even if you absolutly hated it. I like opinions..oh, and please don't take my poem.)]
This is fucking pointless, why am I even trying?
As I waste this cigarette, my song, is slowly dyeing.
I can’t write, I can’t relate to your bullshit situations.
Through these years, I’ve wandered off, I boarder aberration.
I’ve found a way to be concise.
a few stark words, and then..
Boom, pick me up.
That’s oh so nice.
Oh wait, I’m dead again.
A simple piece of glass can do it.
Oh so cold and clear..
I play tag with goD from one hit.
Then demons, do I hear.
They tell me how to write my songs,
and argue, will I not.
How could I?
I’m so sedated..
Such love can’t be bought .
Oh, wait.
Yes it can...
That's how this came to be.
50 dollars, half a gram, sugar coated me.
[(tell me what you think, even if you absolutly hated it. I like opinions..oh, and please don't take my poem.)]
Zitat von dark_child am 20 Juni, 2007, 2218 UhrTo honest I am slightly confused. Maybe I just don't know what you are trying to say. I'm sorry I don't mean to be rude it is well written I just don't understand.
To honest I am slightly confused. Maybe I just don't know what you are trying to say. I'm sorry I don't mean to be rude it is well written I just don't understand.
Zitat von navre am 21 Juni, 2007, 0013 UhrActually the subject matter "from my point of view " is quite easy to interpit... It is about drug use, addiction and the feelings involved while under the influnce of those susbtances... but then again maybe...just maybe my interpitation has something to do with my day job... but then again I could be wrong.
Actually the subject matter "from my point of view " is quite easy to interpit... It is about drug use, addiction and the feelings involved while under the influnce of those susbtances... but then again maybe...just maybe my interpitation has something to do with my day job... but then again I could be wrong.
Zitat von dark_child am 22 Juni, 2007, 2306 UhrWell if your interptition is correct then that is why I don't understand I have never even touched any kind of drug. So I don't know anything about their effects.
Well if your interptition is correct then that is why I don't understand I have never even touched any kind of drug. So I don't know anything about their effects.
Zitat von coma-white am 23 Juni, 2007, 0133 Uhr@Navre wrote:
Actually the subject matter "from my point of view " is quite easy to interpit... It is about drug use, addiction and the feelings involved while under the influnce of those susbtances... but then again maybe...just maybe my interpitation has something to do with my day job... but then again I could be wrong.
Ding ding. We have a winner. Narve, you are absolutly correct. Meth, to be percise.
@Navre wrote:
Actually the subject matter "from my point of view " is quite easy to interpit... It is about drug use, addiction and the feelings involved while under the influnce of those susbtances... but then again maybe...just maybe my interpitation has something to do with my day job... but then again I could be wrong.
Ding ding. We have a winner. Narve, you are absolutly correct. Meth, to be percise.
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