Satisfaction
Zitat von viscious-vixen am 21 April, 2006, 1430 UhrLet me hear me scream...
Let me hear you say you're sorry and you are on your knees....
My blue eyes "amazingly blue" watch you in your pathetic state
And all I can do is laugh... is laughThe insanity that drowns me has finally caught on
She Who Is in control and I don't have a way to stop her
She will rent you from limb and Limb and I don't care
You deserve it... each bit, each length of the tooth
And claw but still you don't understand....
Let me hear me scream...
Let me hear you say you're sorry and you are on your knees....
My blue eyes "amazingly blue" watch you in your pathetic state
And all I can do is laugh... is laugh
The insanity that drowns me has finally caught on
She Who Is in control and I don't have a way to stop her
She will rent you from limb and Limb and I don't care
You deserve it... each bit, each length of the tooth
And claw but still you don't understand....
Zitat von vincent_the_red am 24 April, 2006, 1858 UhrBitter, dark, vengeful, and triumphant.................
I like it.I'd certainly hate to be the one that inspired it, to be sure.
Remind me to never get on your bad side.
:wink:
Bitter, dark, vengeful, and triumphant.................
I like it.
I'd certainly hate to be the one that inspired it, to be sure.
Remind me to never get on your bad side.
:wink:
Zitat von bleeding-fairy am 27 April, 2006, 0945 Uhrnice poem thingy
nice poem thingy
Zitat von sunrava am 29 April, 2006, 1803 UhrMight I suggest a spell check dear Vicious. I dont mean to pick your poem apart as I love your work. But, such a glaring discrepency screams at me.
Rends instead of rents.
Might I suggest a spell check dear Vicious. I dont mean to pick your poem apart as I love your work. But, such a glaring discrepency screams at me.
Rends instead of rents.
Zitat von lovewithdiamonds am 30 April, 2006, 0649 UhrI doubt a spell check would have picked that error up....
I doubt a spell check would have picked that error up....
Zitat von viscious-vixen am 31 Mai, 2006, 2118 UhrRends - Past tense
Rents - Present tense....While it's a small technicality I understand where you are coming from, also on a side note:
'Rent' is a slang term from Australia, within our language ( which it is classified as it has several hundred variables from true "English" and "American". )
Rends - Past tense
Rents - Present tense....
While it's a small technicality I understand where you are coming from, also on a side note:
'Rent' is a slang term from Australia, within our language ( which it is classified as it has several hundred variables from true "English" and "American". )
Zitat von robc666 am 19 Dezember, 2006, 2115 Uhrnice poem. It was bitter and full of vengance, just the way all good poetry should be.
nice poem. It was bitter and full of vengance, just the way all good poetry should be.
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