[fenrir]

fenrir on 20070710 um 2059 Uhr #1077

Rain

Tears,
What sorrow,
What depression,
All of the rain
in the sky,
Found in a tear.
To wipe away the
tears from your face.
Would stop the rain,
Stop the floods.
To put a smile on your face,
Would chase the clouds away.
Joy,
What pleasure,
What happiness,
All of the joy
in the sun,
found in a smile.
All of the life in the
bright blue sky,
found in your smile.
To smile,
Would save a beautiful day.
What a beautiful smile,
On such a beautiful face.
To see you smile,
Would clear my rainy day,
So let me wipe your tears away.
To stop the rain in your heart.
All it takes is a smile.

Jonathan
D. Tilton

[dark_child]

dark_child on 20070711 um 1434 Uhr #7669

I can’t quite expression in coherent wriiten words what I think of this one but if you call me I think I could explain it.

[insidedistuo]

insidedistuo on 20070711 um 1617 Uhr #7670

I thought this was a great use of simple words to express a not so simple thought…
very well done.. 😉
IO

[vampluver]

vampluver on 20070713 um 1258 Uhr #7671

I like this poem a lot. To whoever wrote this you have a lot of talent. It makes a lot of sense it looks like u put a lot of thought into writing it. Well done i luv it

[vampluver]

vampluver on 20070713 um 1357 Uhr #7672

Hey Dark Child So what are your interests i read your profile and it said to ask u my name is kathleen u can call me kat

[vampluver]

vampluver on 20070713 um 1359 Uhr #7673

it looks like you’ve been a member for awhile im new i just found out about this website i luv it i like your quote so u like vampires rock music what are your interests