Poetry ( Untitled)
Zitat von navre am 9 März, 2006, 1114 UhrIt is always a thought provoking experiance when I sit down and wonder which poem I will post here. I'm never quite shure what the deniziens who haunt this place will be receptive to. But, in my short absence I think i will post this one untitled as usual any sugestions as for a title are welcome, thank you and enjoy
These long days are hollow filled.
Restless moments give way to silent nights.
Yet, midnights black echoes with the loudest screams.
Half dreamt thoughts bloom full under the moon’s light.
Despair, finds voice whispered upon the lips of the softest breeze.
To gaze forward gains null, so we judge the past.
Ever growing fields of night lilies sway in the gathering gale.
Blindly we tip toe along the rock way under the pale light.
It is always a thought provoking experiance when I sit down and wonder which poem I will post here. I'm never quite shure what the deniziens who haunt this place will be receptive to. But, in my short absence I think i will post this one untitled as usual any sugestions as for a title are welcome, thank you and enjoy
These long days are hollow filled.
Restless moments give way to silent nights.
Yet, midnights black echoes with the loudest screams.
Half dreamt thoughts bloom full under the moon’s light.
Despair, finds voice whispered upon the lips of the softest breeze.
To gaze forward gains null, so we judge the past.
Ever growing fields of night lilies sway in the gathering gale.
Blindly we tip toe along the rock way under the pale light.
Zitat von necromancerza am 9 März, 2006, 1144 Uhrany sugestions as for a title are welcome
Ok ... i`ll try my hand at this .
"Acknowledge the Anxious Shadows Feed"
How`s that Navre? only you can comment , because only you know the true depth of your written words.I'm never quite shure what the deniziens who haunt this place will be receptive to
Your work is good .. and you know exactly what people around here like ..
"This is crap in my opinion"
But then again .. does mine count ? :twisted:
any sugestions as for a title are welcome
Ok ... i`ll try my hand at this .
"Acknowledge the Anxious Shadows Feed"
How`s that Navre? only you can comment , because only you know the true depth of your written words.
I'm never quite shure what the deniziens who haunt this place will be receptive to
Your work is good .. and you know exactly what people around here like ..
"This is crap in my opinion"
But then again .. does mine count ? :twisted:
Zitat von navre am 9 März, 2006, 1313 Uhrmy intent is not that i will be the only person who knows the true depth of my writing my goal is to empart a picture or the view i had when i wrote it to those who read it ...in other words to make them see what i saw when i wrote it....when i can achive this in everything I write then i will consider my self a true poet
my intent is not that i will be the only person who knows the true depth of my writing my goal is to empart a picture or the view i had when i wrote it to those who read it ...in other words to make them see what i saw when i wrote it....when i can achive this in everything I write then i will consider my self a true poet
Zitat von necromancerza am 9 März, 2006, 1355 Uhrwhen i can achive this in everything I write then i will consider my self a true poet
Bearing in mind that some people will never see it due to the level of their intelegance and not due to the level of your writing ...
Wat i was merely trying to say is that you alone can select the true title to fit the emotion/mindset to which your words were written .But anyway .. how was my title ... :twisted:
when i can achive this in everything I write then i will consider my self a true poet
Bearing in mind that some people will never see it due to the level of their intelegance and not due to the level of your writing ...
Wat i was merely trying to say is that you alone can select the true title to fit the emotion/mindset to which your words were written .
But anyway .. how was my title ... :twisted:
Zitat von ashiri am 16 März, 2006, 0055 Uhrpersonally i feel it should be best left untiltled. this is odd for me cuz i always title my writing (which all sucks) but this is good w/o a title. again very well written.
personally i feel it should be best left untiltled. this is odd for me cuz i always title my writing (which all sucks) but this is good w/o a title. again very well written.
Zitat von navre am 16 März, 2006, 1200 Uhrnecro the suggestion is a good atempt i like the meaning but not wuite right ill think if i can rework it ill let you know when i get one and you can tell me what you think
necro the suggestion is a good atempt i like the meaning but not wuite right ill think if i can rework it ill let you know when i get one and you can tell me what you think
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