[lady_demornay]

lady_demornay on 20051210 um 0637 Uhr #375

Some may say our failings plain
Opium, alcohol or coke the same
as any desire of equal unjust
yet they forget the strongest
that of bloodlust
the hunger that gnaws away the soul
in time claiming it’s earthly toll
and thus we are born; by our own Birth Right
are hunted in fear – labelled and revered
“Children of the Night”
The weakened we offer our solution
in retribution;
Absolution
by pain and tears
given expertise by the years
in which we follow our chosen path
Prepare thine world, for our Day of Wrath
is wrought by those of chosen creed
and as the prey begins to bleed
I call unto thee…
Come my brethren; let us feed…

[vincent_the_red]

vincent_the_red on 20060107 um 2258 Uhr #3631

It’s as if you’ve reached into my soul, plundered it’s deepest recesses, and emerged with my darkest thoughts.

Well done. :vamp:

[navre]

navre on 20060108 um 0536 Uhr #3632

Children of the Night……Yours is by far better than mine dear Sid….and i absolutly love it…..yet I could not resist posting this one as it shares a line of cominality….forgive my intrusion…..

Waiting within the dark, an odd presence the only hint of his existence.
Those who hover around the light,
Few will venture into the mist to seek him out.
What if anything will they find, For he will endeavor to run,
Keeping hidden within the shadows.
Will they give chase, traveling further into the void,
Mindful should they be, for soon their way will be lost.
It is then the wolf stands, full within the moon’s light,
A companion he has found.
Another joins the fold, those who shall be named,
Children of the Night.

[sunrava]

sunrava on 20060220 um 1537 Uhr #3633

*screams in his own ear*

[miyoko]

miyoko on 20060305 um 1859 Uhr #3634

@Navre wrote:

Children of the Night……Yours is by far better than mine dear Sid….and i absolutly love it…..yet I could not resist posting this one as it shares a line of cominality….forgive my intrusion…..

Waiting within the dark, an odd presence the only hint of his existence.
Those who hover around the light,
Few will venture into the mist to seek him out.
What if anything will they find, For he will endeavor to run,
Keeping hidden within the shadows.
Will they give chase, traveling further into the void,
Mindful should they be, for soon their way will be lost.
It is then the wolf stands, full within the moon’s light,
A companion he has found.
Another joins the fold, those who shall be named,
Children of the Night.

As usual, beautiful and i loved it!

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060320 um 2300 Uhr #3635

😛 wonderful. i loved it.
i agree with vincent. he just about hit the nail on the head excuse the cliche
brillant.
Ashiri

[lovewithdiamonds]

lovewithdiamonds on 20060321 um 0445 Uhr #3636

oh my….makes me wish i had more time to write poetry – been a while since i’ve written something i’ve really been proud of….

[ashiri]

ashiri on 20060326 um 1813 Uhr #3637

i say keep going it was excellent!

[fenrir]

fenrir on 20060726 um 2235 Uhr #3638

that was………….beautiful……….gorgeous……….divine…..its hard to come up with words to desribe that.