Hunter's first peotry posted on this site
Zitat von hunter am 25 Dezember, 2005, 0020 UhrHey all. I was reading the things on this site and I decided I should put up some of my poetry. Try them out and let me know what you think.
[/B][/U]Evil
Where do I have a place in this worl?
Who will accept the darkness I bring?
Does it matter?
I am here without life or soul.
Bound to the dark gift.
Bound to din itself.
I am alone in this world of icy sorrow.
I am alone in the darkness.
I see nothing and feel noghting.
I am an empty shell.
No love.
No hope.
Yet daily, I convince myself that I would have it no other way.
The friends that I make die so soon.
The people I manage to care about, betray me.
I am all that is Evil,
In the flesh.-Hunter
Hey all. I was reading the things on this site and I decided I should put up some of my poetry. Try them out and let me know what you think.
Evil
Where do I have a place in this worl?
Who will accept the darkness I bring?
Does it matter?
I am here without life or soul.
Bound to the dark gift.
Bound to din itself.
I am alone in this world of icy sorrow.
I am alone in the darkness.
I see nothing and feel noghting.
I am an empty shell.
No love.
No hope.
Yet daily, I convince myself that I would have it no other way.
The friends that I make die so soon.
The people I manage to care about, betray me.
I am all that is Evil,
In the flesh.
-Hunter
Zitat von necromancerza am 29 Dezember, 2005, 0239 UhrNo love.
No hope.Yes, That is correct .... Dark_child WILL be whipping your ass
:whip:
No love.
No hope.
Yes, That is correct .... Dark_child WILL be whipping your ass
:whip:
Zitat von hunter am 16 März, 2006, 2244 UhrNecro, why must DC always whip my ass? Am I not allowed to express myslef? She has read them and she like em as far as I could tell. :roll:
Necro, why must DC always whip my ass? Am I not allowed to express myslef? She has read them and she like em as far as I could tell. :roll:
Zitat von necromancerza am 17 März, 2006, 0649 UhrNecro, why must DC always whip my ass?
Er .... because its kinky ?
One should allways get one`s ass whiped :wink:
Necro, why must DC always whip my ass?
Er .... because its kinky ?
One should allways get one`s ass whiped :wink:
Zitat von ashiri am 20 März, 2006, 1047 Uhryour poem is very good
it could use some twiking tho the last line is.....it....just doesnt seem to fit right.
sorry but im trying to give you some constructive critisism
is it working
and how did this post become a sex post?
not that i mind. :twisted:
your poem is very good
it could use some twiking tho the last line is.....it....just doesnt seem to fit right.
sorry but im trying to give you some constructive critisism
is it working
and how did this post become a sex post?
not that i mind. :twisted:
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