Almost Perfect
Zitat von navre am 7 Januar, 2006, 0910 UhrAs Requested, A poem reserved for few People.....But I suppose I shall post it all the same.
Almost perfect
Twist it, yank it, stab it, it feels no pain.
Yell, scream, mock and deface it, it feels no pain
It’s an amorphous shape with a titanium skin
Find the crack rusted shut a seemly scab,
If only by accident
Poke at it with seeds of innuendo, see it doubt
Lay open the wound with words of doubt and
Misshapen thought, see it falter
Lay further the hole with speed of thought and
Further doubt, see it crumble
The rusted wound, the one spot to falter
The weak link in its emotional amour
Found by accident laid purposely with doubt
It falters
To the void drifting slowly , down the spiral
As Requested, A poem reserved for few People.....But I suppose I shall post it all the same.
Almost perfect
Twist it, yank it, stab it, it feels no pain.
Yell, scream, mock and deface it, it feels no pain
It’s an amorphous shape with a titanium skin
Find the crack rusted shut a seemly scab,
If only by accident
Poke at it with seeds of innuendo, see it doubt
Lay open the wound with words of doubt and
Misshapen thought, see it falter
Lay further the hole with speed of thought and
Further doubt, see it crumble
The rusted wound, the one spot to falter
The weak link in its emotional amour
Found by accident laid purposely with doubt
It falters
To the void drifting slowly , down the spiral
Zitat von vincent_the_red am 7 Januar, 2006, 2243 UhrIn short, sticks and stones may break my bones, but words can also hurt me. :P
Great poem. I really enjoyed it. 8)
In short, sticks and stones may break my bones, but words can also hurt me. :P
Great poem. I really enjoyed it. 8)
Zitat von viscious-vixen am 8 Januar, 2006, 1149 UhrAn interesting read, I reserve no comment on it,
Thank you for placing it here Narve.
___________
Any everyday thought : That person really must die....
An interesting read, I reserve no comment on it,
Thank you for placing it here Narve.
___________
Any everyday thought : That person really must die....
Zitat von lady_demornay am 12 Januar, 2006, 1105 UhrThank you, Nav`re... it is beautiful. You should not hide it.
Thank you, Nav`re... it is beautiful. You should not hide it.
Zitat von miyoko am 5 März, 2006, 1849 Uhrthere is no comment i will utter for or against this poem. it...said something. good work.
there is no comment i will utter for or against this poem. it...said something. good work.
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