I thought this was a story… 8) but hmmm. very detailed and interesting to put out to the world…
I really liked it… you seem to have a talent for writing, you should go with that…
my only issue with it, was the spelling….
perhaps you could type it up in a program first and spell check it?
it just brings down the impact of the story if I am spell checking in my head…LOL
just a suggestion …;)
IO