@LoveWithDiamonds wrote:
thanks….but like Navre….I’d welcome some criticism….
Not sure if i’m the right person to be offering critisim about someone’s work as i’m not much of a poet. But what i would like to say is how well your poem caught my attention; the atomsphere and imagery were simply captavating.
It’s hard to veiw your own work with a dispassionate eye because you’re too close to the subject. You say you dont like this poem, i say it’s fantastic and keep you the good work.