[ashiri]

ashiri on 20 März, 2006 um 1801 Uhr #4064

i agree with LD and Miyoko both. it does seemed rushed and rough. i have read many of your pieces and as…someone…said it isnt quiet the same as the others.
but all in all it is very well written (yes i say that a lot 🙂 ) and is really goood but could use some improvements. 😀