Close Menu

Axis

Posted In: art

      • dark_child
        Teilnehmer
        dark_child on 20080208 um 1718 Uhr #1157
        Axis

        In my mind
        I see that the world
        Has stopped turning
        On it’s original axis
        It has shifted ever
        So slightly to a darker side
        In my mind
        The world has passed me by
        It spins
        Around me
        Almost never ending
        In my mind
        I see the truth the world hasn’t stopped
        I have
        My axis has shifted
        It is I
        That is spinning
        Ever round

        Dark_Child

      • insidedistuo
        Teilnehmer
        insidedistuo on 20080211 um 2114 Uhr #7912

        I love this DC …. you are growing in your writing.. I really love this… 8)
        IO

      • dark_child
        Teilnehmer
        dark_child on 20080211 um 2146 Uhr #7913

        Thank you IO I’m glad you enjoy it because it is for you and anyone else who appriates it that I place my writing here.

      • navre
        Teilnehmer
        navre on 20080212 um 1508 Uhr #7914

        I would say this, even if your writing does “suck” )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm 😉

      • dark_child
        Teilnehmer
        dark_child on 20080212 um 2135 Uhr #7915

        Thank you Navre

      • necromancerza
        Teilnehmer
        necromancerza on 20080214 um 1023 Uhr #7916

        @Navre wrote:

        I would say this, even if your writing does “suck” )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm 😉

        Roses are red
        violates are blue
        if you come to my bed
        I will fill you with goo ……

        Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.

      • navre
        Teilnehmer
        navre on 20080215 um 0101 Uhr #7917

        Roses are red
        violates are blue
        if you come to my bed
        I will fill you with goo ……

        Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.[/quote]

        Experts you say… well besides an opening line that is about as vliche’ as you can get are you asking for an honest opion

      • necromancerza
        Teilnehmer
        necromancerza on 20080215 um 1548 Uhr #7918

        Nope

      • navre
        Teilnehmer
        navre on 20080217 um 0012 Uhr #7919

        I knew you would agree with me 😈

      • necromancerza
        Teilnehmer
        necromancerza on 20080218 um 0941 Uhr #7920

        We’ll agree not to disagree 😉

      • nazli
        Teilnehmer
        nazli on 20090327 um 1349 Uhr #7921

        Very well said Dark_Child

        i like it

Ansicht von 10 Antwort-Themen
  • Du musst angemeldet sein, um auf dieses Thema antworten zu können.