Poetry ( ?? Wings ?? )
Zitat von navre am 11 März, 2006, 0039 UhrSo i thought to my self that i would normally post a poem about once a week but in my absence of about three weeks due to work related "things" I would post another so here we go. It seems a bit od to read well at least it does to me unles one could see the picture that inspired it alas no i dont have that picture wish I did but none the less here it is as always let me know it is sucks to bad and all that enjoy...Na`vre
Upon flesh scribed wings she pins her hopes and dreams...
Born to the land she longs to soar the clouds above...
Standing open before the world she stares into the bright horizon...
Glancing back unto her shoulders she watches...
Will her penned feathers, make flesh and bone...
The winds blow as if teasing her...
Tousled hair and soft wept fears gather about her countenance...
For she is of the earth
Until her plumage grows to full she will trod the dusty ground...
Looking over her shoulder, and staring at the clouds
So i thought to my self that i would normally post a poem about once a week but in my absence of about three weeks due to work related "things" I would post another so here we go. It seems a bit od to read well at least it does to me unles one could see the picture that inspired it alas no i dont have that picture wish I did but none the less here it is as always let me know it is sucks to bad and all that enjoy...Na`vre
Upon flesh scribed wings she pins her hopes and dreams...
Born to the land she longs to soar the clouds above...
Standing open before the world she stares into the bright horizon...
Glancing back unto her shoulders she watches...
Will her penned feathers, make flesh and bone...
The winds blow as if teasing her...
Tousled hair and soft wept fears gather about her countenance...
For she is of the earth
Until her plumage grows to full she will trod the dusty ground...
Looking over her shoulder, and staring at the clouds

Zitat von maestro am 11 März, 2006, 0432 UhrNice imagery and good to have you back dude :D
If i had a model there i could make an image out of it for you, but unfortunately my holidays at the cliffy north sea will be entirely non site related ;)
Nice imagery and good to have you back dude :D
If i had a model there i could make an image out of it for you, but unfortunately my holidays at the cliffy north sea will be entirely non site related ;)
Zitat von ashiri am 16 März, 2006, 0050 Uhrits relly good i think it is well written with good imagry it... flows if you know what i mean. i would love to read more of your poetry. youre really good.
its relly good i think it is well written with good imagry it... flows if you know what i mean. i would love to read more of your poetry. youre really good.
Zitat von honey_muffin_demon am 17 März, 2006, 1623 UhrWow. Lovely imagery, but it definately was more than that. Very beautiful though. I wish some of my poems would turn out as artistic as yours, but if they did...then they wouldn't quite be mine would they? :wink:
Wow. Lovely imagery, but it definately was more than that. Very beautiful though. I wish some of my poems would turn out as artistic as yours, but if they did...then they wouldn't quite be mine would they? :wink:
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