[valek357]

valek357 on 20060724 um 1414 Uhr #731

On wings of shame i leave my home
cast away for deeds ive done
A souless child cold and scared
no love for me to be shared
Weeping crying all alone
emotions bloodied by verbal stones
Flying deep into the night
my body numb i prey for light
Striped of pride i start my quest
friged wind burns my flesh
The path ahead is dark unclear
i move ahead with unsure fear
Serching for a home who will care
But in my hart i know that is nowhere.
😥
Valek

[insidedistuo]

insidedistuo on 20060724 um 1737 Uhr #5801

I like this one, but not one of my favorites so far… 😉
keep them coming.. of course… I havent wrote anything to be critiqued on myself…
lol..
IO 🙄

[soulrain]

soulrain on 20060725 um 1912 Uhr #5802

oooooh. that was good! i Like it! 🙂