Incredible
Zitat von hunter am 27 Februar, 2006, 2040 UhrIncredible
I cuddle up next to you on the bed.
I desire something, but I do not wish it to be said.
My hand slides up and down your side feeling out your curves.
The decision to try you out, burns my nerves.
I do not know that your desire is the same.
I just know that I'm the only one that can make you tame.
I slowly and gently kiss and bite your neck.
You quickly kiss me, taking off my shirt, sliding your hands up my chest and biting my peck.
Now I know that your desires are as mine.
As I kiss you, I look you up and down....Danm you're fine!
I slowly take off your shirt and bra.
You kiss and bite my neck, leaving me in awe.
I take off the rest of my clothing.
You run your hands all over my body and I find it suprisingly soothing.
I bite and lick your belly knowing that it will have a good effect.
You tense up and take sharp breaths....The effect is as I would suspect.
I continue to nibble my way gently up to your breasts.
I tease and suck your nipples only for an effect that will bring our decision to a rest.
I lick between them and on up to your neck and ear.
There, I bite and play with it in my mouth just to kick things into gear.
We begin to kiss and I blindly reach down and unbotton your pants.
I knew this was our time....Our chance.
I take off your pants and then your thong.
I spread your legs and kneel on the bed between them as you comment on what you see is long.
I sit for a moment and observe my beautiful nude goddess.
I think about how she is the hottest.
I then run my hands down and along the inside of your thighs.
I then follow along kissing, letting my hands be my eyes.
I manuver around a certain area, knowing that comfort cannot yet be brought by my touch.
I don't mind because as hott as that area is, it doesn't intrest me much.
As I stretch like a cat, I slowly slide up your naked form, tasting and kissing your skin.
My hands tell me how you are sexy and thin.
As I kiss your belly and begin to move up, my hands stall on your hips.
I work my way up and soon find your lips.
I kiss you to ask you approval to show that you're ready.
A long romantic kiss follows as I try to keep my body steady.
We pause momentarily to put my "sheathe" in place.
I look carefuly at you and observe your steady but sure face.
I slowly penetrate and on your face I read pain.
Following your instructions, I stretch you out, knowing that pleasure is what we'll gain.
As the pain fades, neither of us are audible.
What came next can only be described by one word.....Incredible.
Incredible
I cuddle up next to you on the bed.
I desire something, but I do not wish it to be said.
My hand slides up and down your side feeling out your curves.
The decision to try you out, burns my nerves.
I do not know that your desire is the same.
I just know that I'm the only one that can make you tame.
I slowly and gently kiss and bite your neck.
You quickly kiss me, taking off my shirt, sliding your hands up my chest and biting my peck.
Now I know that your desires are as mine.
As I kiss you, I look you up and down....Danm you're fine!
I slowly take off your shirt and bra.
You kiss and bite my neck, leaving me in awe.
I take off the rest of my clothing.
You run your hands all over my body and I find it suprisingly soothing.
I bite and lick your belly knowing that it will have a good effect.
You tense up and take sharp breaths....The effect is as I would suspect.
I continue to nibble my way gently up to your breasts.
I tease and suck your nipples only for an effect that will bring our decision to a rest.
I lick between them and on up to your neck and ear.
There, I bite and play with it in my mouth just to kick things into gear.
We begin to kiss and I blindly reach down and unbotton your pants.
I knew this was our time....Our chance.
I take off your pants and then your thong.
I spread your legs and kneel on the bed between them as you comment on what you see is long.
I sit for a moment and observe my beautiful nude goddess.
I think about how she is the hottest.
I then run my hands down and along the inside of your thighs.
I then follow along kissing, letting my hands be my eyes.
I manuver around a certain area, knowing that comfort cannot yet be brought by my touch.
I don't mind because as hott as that area is, it doesn't intrest me much.
As I stretch like a cat, I slowly slide up your naked form, tasting and kissing your skin.
My hands tell me how you are sexy and thin.
As I kiss your belly and begin to move up, my hands stall on your hips.
I work my way up and soon find your lips.
I kiss you to ask you approval to show that you're ready.
A long romantic kiss follows as I try to keep my body steady.
We pause momentarily to put my "sheathe" in place.
I look carefuly at you and observe your steady but sure face.
I slowly penetrate and on your face I read pain.
Following your instructions, I stretch you out, knowing that pleasure is what we'll gain.
As the pain fades, neither of us are audible.
What came next can only be described by one word.....Incredible.
Zitat von miyoko am 7 März, 2006, 1727 Uhrok, thought of something else i could say here. i think you need a bit more description in some areas. its just the teensiest bit rough. you know what i mean? but really...wow. this completely caught my attention. good word choice and use of rythym.
The Dark Lady---`---{@ Excellent! A rose to show my appreciation for your work! :)
ok, thought of something else i could say here. i think you need a bit more description in some areas. its just the teensiest bit rough. you know what i mean? but really...wow. this completely caught my attention. good word choice and use of rythym.
The Dark Lady
---`---{@ Excellent! A rose to show my appreciation for your work! :)
Zitat von hunter am 16 März, 2006, 2238 UhrWell, thank you. I was half alseep when I wrote it. I didn't to be to discriptive because the the girl that this happend with, I'm still dating. I didn't know if it would offend her or not, you know? In any case, thanks for you compliments. This is the third peom I have written that has been happy and the first that has actually rymed. I can't really write happy poetry because I'm a depressed guy....Used to be depressed until this girl came along. She really flipped things around for me, you know?
Well, thank you. I was half alseep when I wrote it. I didn't to be to discriptive because the the girl that this happend with, I'm still dating. I didn't know if it would offend her or not, you know? In any case, thanks for you compliments. This is the third peom I have written that has been happy and the first that has actually rymed. I can't really write happy poetry because I'm a depressed guy....Used to be depressed until this girl came along. She really flipped things around for me, you know?
Zitat von ashiri am 20 März, 2006, 1750 Uhrit is really good i know its hard to rhyme for a poem especcially that long of one
um.....most like constructive critisism,but...uh... i cant offer any seeings how your writing is better than mine. :wink:
i know how that one goes my, now ex, boyfriend was the same for me. i wont go into details. i do know how that one feels...ask miyoko. :)
anyway very good and i look forward to reading more.
Ashiri
it is really good i know its hard to rhyme for a poem especcially that long of one
um.....most like constructive critisism,but...uh... i cant offer any seeings how your writing is better than mine. :wink:
i know how that one goes my, now ex, boyfriend was the same for me. i wont go into details. i do know how that one feels...ask miyoko. :)
anyway very good and i look forward to reading more.
Ashiri
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