[valek357]

valek357 on 29 Juli, 2006 um 0219 Uhr #742

All alone my emotions dead
the final thought runs through my head
In the dark i sit and stare
my heart is broke beyond repair
Deep inside for hope i search
darkness only in my soul is perched
All love from my life i drove away
no reason left for me to stay
Blade pressed tight flesh it rips
my life flows down my finger tips
No pain to feel its all been spent
my blood the price to my journeys end.
🙁
Valek

[thesunsetter]

thesunsetter on 29 Juli, 2006 um 0544 Uhr #5857

wow! really good, i love the way the last part has been put, the way it’s said is really effective, post more!!! please…

[fenrir]

fenrir on 31 Juli, 2006 um 2342 Uhr #5858

Not bad. Great wording. Great soul.