Axis
Zitat von dark_child am 8 Februar, 2008, 1718 UhrAxis
In my mind
I see that the world
Has stopped turning
On it's original axis
It has shifted ever
So slightly to a darker side
In my mind
The world has passed me by
It spins
Around me
Almost never ending
In my mind
I see the truth the world hasn't stopped
I have
My axis has shifted
It is I
That is spinning
Ever roundDark_Child
Axis
In my mind
I see that the world
Has stopped turning
On it's original axis
It has shifted ever
So slightly to a darker side
In my mind
The world has passed me by
It spins
Around me
Almost never ending
In my mind
I see the truth the world hasn't stopped
I have
My axis has shifted
It is I
That is spinning
Ever round
Dark_Child
Zitat von insidedistuo am 11 Februar, 2008, 2114 UhrI love this DC .... you are growing in your writing.. I really love this... 8)
IO
I love this DC .... you are growing in your writing.. I really love this... 8)
IO
Zitat von dark_child am 11 Februar, 2008, 2146 UhrThank you IO I'm glad you enjoy it because it is for you and anyone else who appriates it that I place my writing here.
Thank you IO I'm glad you enjoy it because it is for you and anyone else who appriates it that I place my writing here.
Zitat von navre am 12 Februar, 2008, 1508 UhrI would say this, even if your writing does "suck" )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm :wink:
I would say this, even if your writing does "suck" )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm :wink:
Zitat von dark_child am 12 Februar, 2008, 2135 UhrThank you Navre
Thank you Navre
Zitat von necromancerza am 14 Februar, 2008, 1023 Uhr@Navre wrote:
I would say this, even if your writing does "suck" )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm :wink:
Roses are red
violates are blue
if you come to my bed
I will fill you with goo ......Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.
@Navre wrote:
I would say this, even if your writing does "suck" )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm :wink:
Roses are red
violates are blue
if you come to my bed
I will fill you with goo ......
Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.
Zitat von navre am 15 Februar, 2008, 0101 UhrRoses are red
violates are blue
if you come to my bed
I will fill you with goo ......Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.[/quote]
Experts you say... well besides an opening line that is about as vliche' as you can get are you asking for an honest opion
Roses are red
violates are blue
if you come to my bed
I will fill you with goo ......
Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.
Experts you say... well besides an opening line that is about as vliche' as you can get are you asking for an honest opion
Zitat von necromancerza am 15 Februar, 2008, 1548 UhrNope
Nope
Zitat von necromancerza am 18 Februar, 2008, 0941 UhrWe'll agree not to disagree :wink:
We'll agree not to disagree :wink:
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