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    dark_child on #1157

    Axis

    In my mind
    I see that the world
    Has stopped turning
    On it’s original axis
    It has shifted ever
    So slightly to a darker side
    In my mind
    The world has passed me by
    It spins
    Around me
    Almost never ending
    In my mind
    I see the truth the world hasn’t stopped
    I have
    My axis has shifted
    It is I
    That is spinning
    Ever round

    Dark_Child


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    insidedistuo on #7912

    I love this DC …. you are growing in your writing.. I really love this… 8)
    IO


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    dark_child on #7913

    Thank you IO I’m glad you enjoy it because it is for you and anyone else who appriates it that I place my writing here.


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    navre on #7914

    I would say this, even if your writing does “suck” )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm 😉


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    dark_child on #7915

    Thank you Navre


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    necromancerza on #7916

    @navre wrote:

    I would say this, even if your writing does “suck” )) thou that is not what I am saying (( at least you have the guts to post it and every one else who has something other then constructive critisisums can just feth off hmm 😉

    Roses are red
    violates are blue
    if you come to my bed
    I will fill you with goo ……

    Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.


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    navre on #7917

    Roses are red
    violates are blue
    if you come to my bed
    I will fill you with goo ……

    Nope I`m going to leave it to the experts here.[/quote]

    Experts you say… well besides an opening line that is about as vliche’ as you can get are you asking for an honest opion


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    necromancerza on #7918

    Nope


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    navre on #7919

    I knew you would agree with me 😈


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    necromancerza on #7920

    We’ll agree not to disagree 😉


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    nazli on #7921

    Very well said Dark_Child

    i like it

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